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reclaims of a bastard daughter

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Reclaims of a bastard daughter - 
    rusty chains, daunting pales 
    of an erratic moon that utters

    Murder 

As tear-drops to a dirty floor 
    a deteriorated smile I saw in her face,    
    then an evil twinge saying 
“I hate

    You - 

Was you reluctant, hiding from    
    
the things that eyes could say?

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what rippled waters beneath an adopted moon –
    Was it that you mastered the art of bribe 
    
and could talk your way away from  

    Sorrow

black strokes, of the darkest dark
    laughing hysterically though bleeding
    intravenous  cuts, of a useless heart now

    Dead -

liars lifeless lips, did you speak what no
    words could easily have unsaid?

when relationships deteriorate and break down, when nothing can take back what has been said. when the heart seems to bleed itself dead.
Its about real family problems, that divide so easily. when you go further down the and you know that there is no easy fix, when you see that person as helpless or when the cry for help is beyond perdition, used too often. I used a different style. opinions?
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coraajna's avatar
This style is pretty cool! As for the poem itself, it is very powerful. Great job! Clap